Notes: My revision of my first comic. The orginal can still be found here along with it's original notes. Perhaps I should go into the orginas of why I wanted to change this the second time. This wasn't actually really a problem comic too me too much. Mostly I wanted to clean up the sketchy pencilness of it. And to change the 6th panel a little bit. And make the guy in the 4th a little more apperently angry. Snodgers remains a little bit more agressive in this strip than he's proven to be in later strips, but I don't want to make drastic changes to events that happen within, which I think would be required in this case. Actually this was fun to do. I don't do a lot of drawing like this on a regular basis. Which I probably should, since I enjoy it, except that also takes time, which I sometimes lack durring classes.