Notes: Rewriting is an interesting process, and one I should work on including more when I do my comics. In doing this a day late I looked at the orginial punchline and, in short, feel a tota rewrite of the last 3 panels helped the comic a lot, just to remove crowding in the strip, and hopefully use a better joke. Anyway, that's a bit of a moot point, since the alternative only resides in my head, and a corner of my scetchbook. It's a relief though not to have to draw the blood any more. It was fun at first, but repeating such a patern is a bit annoying. I could desire to say more about the comic, since I do enjoy it, but it seems for the most part to state itself.